Lazy 3 'o Clock SundayembersilverSeptember 13 2010, 18:54:37 UTC
He leaned until his back was resting against the opposite side of the crow’s-nest, eyelids at half-mast. It seemed the highest point of the ship was the only place he could get a little peace from the hectic role he filled. Thatch called it his ‘perch’, which quickly earned him a palm over the head-always resulting in the Fourth Division Commander frantically making sure not a hair was out of place. With a twinge of reluctance, Marco ran through his mental To-Do list
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Re: Secrets (part 2)ishimuraSeptember 25 2010, 06:56:44 UTC
Really? Thank you, though I admit I was right about the odd syntax (I wrote that in three hours), I'm glad that it's still good. And there are really too little Kuzan AKA Aokiji fics out there.
Mmh, given that I wrote this due Kuzan and Saul being in the row of memorable duo-friends in the OP world (them on the more tragic side), I'd say...
Duo - friends (like Pell and Chaka, Norland and Kagara, Brook and Yorki, Saul and Kuzan/Aokiji...)
The newest member of the Whitebeard Pirates glanced around the very large room he was in. Shadowy figures surrounded him to the point where he couldn’t make out any of their faces. Sure, he could recognize the vague forms of Marco (his hair gave it away), Jozu (his size) and Thatch (hair again), but that was about it. The figures stepped back, creating a clear pathway to the back of the room for the new member.
He glanced around at the others, unsure what in the hell was going on here. Really, he’d just been told to meet Vista in the galley for… something… Izou never said. And when he went down there, what did he find? The entire room turned into some kind of creepy ceremony hall. They probably used the galley because it was one of the few rooms that could actually hold all the commanders and Whitebeard-who he saw in the back; there was no missing that man in a room… or anywhere else for that matter
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Mmh, given that I wrote this due Kuzan and Saul being in the row of memorable duo-friends in the OP world (them on the more tragic side), I'd say...
Duo - friends (like Pell and Chaka, Norland and Kagara, Brook and Yorki, Saul and Kuzan/Aokiji...)
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And, I will probably be reviewing this on FFN soon...
Keep an eye out for "Cult" because I'm TOTALLY doing that! ;)
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He glanced around at the others, unsure what in the hell was going on here. Really, he’d just been told to meet Vista in the galley for… something… Izou never said. And when he went down there, what did he find? The entire room turned into some kind of creepy ceremony hall. They probably used the galley because it was one of the few rooms that could actually hold all the commanders and Whitebeard-who he saw in the back; there was no missing that man in a room… or anywhere else for that matter ( ... )
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I'm completely in love with this and just might have to put this as the background on my computer soon...
:D
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When I saw your prompt, I couldn't resist not doing a fanart for it. XDD
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