Terribly Sorry

[eilish_writer]

I have written a poem. Well, I wrote one a while ago, I think around January and my summer holidays. But that's not the point. I have a poem which I will post here (finally, I know) and you can read it, give feedback etc. It's quite sad, I guess, but yeah. I haven't posted it on FictionPress.com, yet, but I might at some point. Maybe.

Terribly

Comments

[garnet_and_jade]

Thank you for giving me feedback on my own poem.
Now I will give you feedback on yours.

*Nods*

I liked it. It has sort of a mellow tone to it, and also like the person is just giving up. There are quite a few "Terribly sorry's" in there, but that's okay. It's a stylistic thing to me. I like how it's just random...dropping milk, and drinking. It's awesome.

*Nods*

Good job.

[eilish_writer]

Thanks for the feedback!

*Nods*