We As People: Chpt. 3 Fr/Uk, Canada, America

Aug 27, 2009 16:45

 Annnd yeah, here's chapter three of that fic that just won't stop. I couldn't tell if it was the way my Alfred's mind skipped around or just the fact I'm tried as hell that this seems so disjointed. Might re-write it. another i-pod update!


  I kept watching him. I didn't do that much before now. You'd think I'd already gotten used to people ( Read more... )

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whak_hat November 23 2009, 04:54:16 UTC
this…wow Art is such an ass. Thanks for this

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evokers November 23 2009, 17:16:07 UTC
your first person prose is excellent ♥

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unestel November 23 2009, 19:27:00 UTC
Lovely, can't wait to read more

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