Comments | eiregirl05: Silence (PG-13 Fringe)

eiregirl05

Silence (PG-13 Fringe)

Apr 25, 2011 21:37

Title: Silence
Rating:PG-13
Spoilers: Everything up to "6:02 AM"
Characters/Pairings: AltLiv, Lincoln(Red Universe), Scarlie, Lincoln (Blue Universe), Peter Bishop, Lincoln/AltLiv, Peter/Olivia, Scarlie/Mona.
Summary: She couldn't believe she was in this position right now...
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I do not own Fringe or it's characters.

( She was tired and scared, and didn't know what to think anymore... )

olivia dunham, peter bishop, lincoln lee, fringe, fic

Comments 4

ameliorate23 April 26 2011, 20:19:59 UTC

I thought this was really good! (Came here from fringeonfox) I really liked Altlivia's monologue and seeing her thought process like that. And I have to agree, I think she still would have gone to Lincoln, even if she was still with Frank.

Sorry for the deleted post; HTML fail the first time.

eiregirl05 April 26 2011, 21:13:51 UTC

lol not a problem!(about the HTML thing)

And thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I sat at my computer for like...twenty minutes mulling over the part about her taking Henry to Lincoln even if she was still with Frank. I'm glad someone agrees with me on that. I just think that...well she trusts Lincoln so much, and while she might have loved Frank, I don't think she would have trusted him to protect Henry.

elialys April 27 2011, 04:01:18 UTC

Sweetie!!! Your story leaves me in a very emotionally confused place. But that's a good thing while reading an angsty story with a hint of alt!love :') You would almost make me ship them! (Sorry, still not totally into them!!).

I really, really loved her thoughts at the beginning, about her situation, Henry, and her responsibility in what's happening. And can I just say OMFG GENE LMAO!! Oh that was brilliant bb I'M SURE SHE KNEW!! :'D

Having her "hallucinating" Lincoln was all kind of wicked, very nice parallel with Olivia hallucinating Peter. Lincoln heard her say "I love you" right? GAH!!! I'm conflicted again!! Part of me hope she will still get to cross over before the end of the season so we can have a confrontation, but at the same time, there's so many things happening already, when Olivia and Peter are going to learn about mini!Henry UGH!!

I love how she gets to meet our!Lincoln, and how she finds him adorable XD

THIS MAKES ME WANT TO SEE THE NEW EPISODE SO BADLY PEARL!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MEEEEEEE?

eiregirl05 April 27 2011, 04:54:59 UTC

I aim to please (in an 'HAHA I GOT YOU CONFLICTED!' kinda way )XD. I'm glad you liked it ( ... )