Brigit's Flame Entry-Week One

[eiremauve]

Title: The Old Creek
Author: eiremauve
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 72
Prompt: Fugue Refugee

Comments

[keppiehed]

This is a pretty poem! I am not sure that I entirely see the prompt phrases represented within, but that could be largely based upon interpretation. I think with an eye towards editing spelling you could have something really lovely here. It was quite enjoyable, and I thank you for sharing!

[writingmoments]

This made me smile and remember the joys of wading in creeks when I was younger.

Maybe that's my problem, maybe I should snub my nose at convention and just wade more.

Life did seem more magical then..

Thanks for reminding me of pleasant times:)