Those were some great last lines. I really loved how you captured what it was like for Sam to be in Afghanistan, especially the part where you say that he tries to sleep "breathing in sandy Afghanistan atmosphere while praying to see another sunrise."
And also, as usual, the last three paragraphs. You are really good at making me FEEL the end of the story!
Haha, really? Thanks! I'm flattered :) I didn't really plan it to be like that.. it sort of wrote itself as it often did. Glad that it turned out alright at the end.
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And also, as usual, the last three paragraphs. You are really good at making me FEEL the end of the story!
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