Chapter 4

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Two days later Whitman and Hunt went to central command of the coalition forces a few miles outside the city of Baghdad, Iraq. General Gardner requested their presence. Gardner was cool in the aspect that he never gave the two specifics when they were sent out into a mission. Hunt and Whitman were allowed to do what ever their heart’s consent

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Hi!

[bmbmcrash]

Hi Frank! It's Jessica, from Urbandale. I didn't actually read that...I just thought I'd say hi. My livejournal is bmbmcrash, check it out some time

Re: Hi!

[bmbmcrash]

Now I did read it all. I think that it's a great story and you've got potential, as Alex already said. Keep expressing yourself!