Comments | el_spirito23: Just A Little Bit

el_spirito23

Just A Little Bit

Dec 08, 2011 20:18

A/N: written for a prompt over at suits-meme and it also fills the 'unrequited pining' square on my h/c bingo card! also, this is my first Suits fanfic EVER which is kind of a travesty considering how much I LOVE this show ( Read more... )

suits, drama, humor, harvey specter, fanfiction, donna paulsen

Comments 7

windscryer December 9 2011, 06:27:24 UTC

OH. MY. STARS.

THIS COULD NOT BE MORE PERFECT! THIS WAS... IT... IT WAS JUST... *commence keyboard flailing* ASHDFJKSAHFSDAGHAGFLGFDFA!!!!11!1!

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Okay, now for a proper review because, seriously, this story deserves it.

1. OH STARS SO CUTE! Wee!Harvey and Wee!Donna are as awesome and BAMF as they are as adults-which I totally believe because that kind of awesome is nature, not nurture-and just.... GAH. MY WORDS FAIL ME. I just love it, okay? ALOT A LOT.

Very adorably in character and perfect and just SO CUTE.

2. HAHAHAHAHAHAAH OH HARVEY. It's adorable the way you think Donna needs a hero and not a sidekick. ^_^ *ruffles his hair and ignores his glare* Also, WHUMP! \o/ I didn't ask for it, but you delivered anyway and just... yeah. AWE. SOME.

3. STAR TREK CONVENTION. OH MAN I DIDN'T EVEN *THINK* OF THAT!!! :O I LOVE THIS ONE SO HARD. Donna is totally the kind of girl that lures the geeks out of their basements for a convention: beautiful, smart, and wearing the Orion Slave Girl costume because she rocks the green body paint ( ... )

el_spirito23 December 9 2011, 16:35:47 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it!!! Yeah, I tried to kind of incorporate little elements of the show, and I was SO proud when I thought of the Trek Convention! Haha, that was definitely my crowning moment of awesome. Anyway, I'm so glad this worked and thanks for the great prompt!!!

thatotherperv December 9 2011, 15:26:18 UTC

gah, this was perfect. I love their relationship and this was like catnip

el_spirito23 December 9 2011, 16:37:06 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!!! I was a little bit worried about keeping in character, so I'm super stoked that they came across well. Thanks! :)

13empress December 11 2011, 08:28:20 UTC

I enjoyed all the scenarios :)))
But as a Trekker, of course I kinda wish the ST con one happened lol -- she WOULD go as an Orion slave girl and Harvey, just lol, no words needed
Thanks for sharing this - Donna is awesom fun

roshni06 December 11 2011, 23:56:27 UTC

so this was all kinds of awesomeness! With a few of them you had be all melted inside..with others you had be rofl-ing and with one of them you had me rooting for Donna.

You write an excellent and in character Harvey & Donna! I could picture it in my head. :D

nyx_girl October 29 2012, 23:28:01 UTC

Loved it!