[FF] Eyes Wide Shut

[elaineleyn]

Title: Eyes Wide Shut
Pairing: Suho/D.O.
Genre: University! AU, Fluff, Crack
Rating: PG-13
Summary: 4630 words. Do Kyungsoo is the socially awkward student team manager of the Green Hunters' Men's Basketball Team. Let's say Joonmyun is the team captain and a shoujo manga plot follows.
Note: Set in the same verse as One on One but can be read as a

Comments

[mara_ciro]

Will be pasting my comments from the beta-copy along with a few others.

FIRST OF ALL, YOU APPEALED TO MY INNER SUCKER FOR SHOUJOU MANGA LIKE PLOTS. ORZ. I AM A TOTAL CHEESEBALL AND YOU KNOW IT. GOING DOWN WITH THIS PARENT SHIP. ALL THE CUTENESS IN THE WORLD. I CANNOT.

KIM JONGIN, ANG LANDI MO. (Why do I have a feeling that your Jongin was slightly based on yours truly?)

IRL, I'm not a fan of Chen/Baekhyun… but whatever. It works in this verse. BaekYeol pa rin

Evil!/Supportive! BFF Chen = awesome... ISKOLAR NG BAYAN PALA SI CHEN CHEN EH.

ANYWAY. I WANT MY VERSION OF JOONMYUN. NAKAKAINIS. FUCK THIS.

[elaineleyn]

shoujo mangas = best medicine for F.A.B.s /nods nods

hahaha don't worry, jongin is not based on you or on anybody okay. i am raising my eyebrow right now and you can't see me.

chen/baekhyun is rare as hell but it yep, just a little push and it works hehe and chen is a maroon hohoho \o/

i want a joonmyun as well. tell me when you find one. orz

[mara_ciro]

HAHAHA. The malandi thing was based on a joke Alex once said... about me being one of the resident malandi of Bluestans. Remember? :P

Well, you're the goddess of crack and fluff, so I guess you can make BaekChen work. Although I will go down with the BaekYeol ship no matter what. Kind of interested to see the entire EXO in this AU verse. >:DDDDD

[elaineleyn]

because you are the resident malandi of bluestans but i seriously doubt you'd pull off a jongin level. i still have faith in you haha

huuu will try to give the baekchen a shot. maybe just a short one :D

[exoz]

aww awww.. I love the krisyeol part and now this!!!! <333 LOVE YOU!!!
The d-ho one is lighter, more innocent and sweeter than the romance filled and more mature/not too cheesy krisyeol. it;s understandable coz the two pairings ar different in everything ^^

you made them good!

[elaineleyn]

d-ho is all about fluff and rainbows and angels in my head. i can't imagine writing them the way i wrote krisyeol lol

thank you, i accept your love! lol ^^

[elaineleyn]

soosoo! awww, it sounds cute but it means something funny in my mother tongue if you change the intonation lol

eep, i'm glad you liked it. thank you!

[prpldrkrse]

;~; it's just soooooo so so soo cute like seriously cute
so innocent and romantic and omg jealous suho is cute x3
and the not-so-subtle chenhyun (or idk how is it called) is cute as well XD

I really enjoyed reading it~ :3 *goes back to reread*

[elaineleyn]

the moe moe dokidoki power worked on you lol chenhyun/baekchen is rare but yep yep, we get the chemistry haha

aww, thank you! :3

[prpldrkrse]

i'm a total sucker for shoujo manga so yeah :3
and joonmyun's "what's so different about him" can also be 'translated' to kyungsoo has been pretty in his eyes and therefore he didnt see any changes wae so preshus waaaeeeee ;~;
chenhyun/baekchen is rare, even rarer than baekhun which is ridiculously rare ~_~

and youre welcoome :3

[lessvocals]

*GLOMPS*
OH MY GOD YOU FINALLY WROTE IT AND I LOVE YOU TO PIECES AND THIS BEGINS MY INCOHERENT WORD VOMIT.

First of, Jongin is not in the pep squad? ;~~~~; /HOPES SHATTERED hahaha well okay no, I just reallyyyyy wanted a cheerleader Kai but flirty brat is okay too. LOL

ASDFGAJDHAJDHA KYUNGSOO AND JONGDAE ARE BESTFRIENDS AND YES HUHU THAT'S HOW IT SHOULD BE THANK YOU FOR LE MAKEOVER YOU ARE FABULOUS CHENCHEN <333

And yaaaaaaaaaaaay Joonmyeon confessed and I am floating on a fluffy cloud of loveeeeee *A*

Are you planning to write Chen/Bacon????? Because it's a pairing that I have not considered before and I am curious sooooo.....give it a shot? Hahaha

Just ugh I am not making any sense so imma end it here. :o

[elaineleyn]

IF YOU'RE JUST AWARE OF MY STRUGGLES IN WRITING THIS hahaha

yep, jongin is not in the pep squad :( because i needed someone to flirt with kyungsoo and be a brat to joonmyun and he's the perfect person sooo orz i gave up that idea. there might be a cheerleader hunhan though? not promising anything because i am quite scared of writing hunhan idek hahaha

AND YES BFF WITH HARDCORE BROMANCE JONGDAE/KYUNGSOO JUST FOR YOU OKAY

contemplating about chen/baek because it's a rare pairing buuuut maybe a drabble about their blind date? hahaha

[lessvocals]

*HUGGLES* The Jongdae/Kyungsoo BFF-ery is beautiful and asdfgasjhasa thank you for that ;w; Anything Chen/Baek will do hahaha. <3