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Dec 26, 2004 16:10


Title: secrets revealed

Author: elanor_elf

Summary: Harry has outed himself to his best friend. How will things go now that the golden trio has been torn apart ?
Raiting: PG13 for now
Warning: slightly AU , Ron is out of character.
Pairing: Harry/Draco

Beta: The wonderful damned_queen

Disclaimer: Not mine . Just fanfiction.

Chapter One )

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3libras December 26 2004, 15:46:40 UTC
Hm... you seem to be confusing "where" and "were." You don't use enough commas (though this may just be me?), and your Draco seems out of character, at least at the end. Also, I have a hard time believing that Ron would call his best mate a fag...
Other than that, it's a decent fic. :D

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elanor_elf December 26 2004, 15:47:52 UTC
Thanks , I should put a warning of slight AU , for the Ron character.

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wanna_ramone December 28 2004, 00:31:22 UTC
more more more more.. MORE

i love that shrunken head on the knight bus.. 'hey guys. why the long faces?' lol

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elanor_elf December 28 2004, 09:16:08 UTC
hehe thank you next part will be here ... when my beta has beta-ed it ^-^ and yes I love that shrunken head !lol

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1875 December 28 2004, 10:30:07 UTC
Ik vind het leuk
Hopelijk komt Hoofdstuk 2 snel :]

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elanor_elf December 28 2004, 10:32:15 UTC
hehe dank je *hugs* H2 is al bij de beta ^-^

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elanor_elf December 28 2004, 10:50:44 UTC
aw thanks ! Chapter 2 will be posted soon ^-^

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greyorchids December 28 2004, 13:47:20 UTC
I would like to see where this goes, so far so good.

Where did you get that icon? He's yummy ;) Who's the model? Thanks in advance,

-jo

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elanor_elf December 28 2004, 15:58:02 UTC
I got it from an lj user see the name in my keyworks OOOh and I love alex band he's so cute .

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