Comments | elarielf: Kisenkekkon (貴賤結婚): Morganatic Marriage, KKM, Yuuram, Conyuu PG-13

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Kisenkekkon (貴賤結婚): Morganatic Marriage, KKM, Yuuram, Conyuu PG-13

Dec 20, 2011 13:03

Title: Kisenkekkon (貴賤結婚)
Characters: Yuuri, Wolfram, Conrad; Yozak, Cheri, Gwendal, Greta, Gunter, others.
Rating: PG-13 (T)
Word count: 9000
Notes: Writting and characterization exercises! Basically this is taking a look at a Yuuram->Conyuu transition without character bashing (hopefully) and realistically from what we've been shown in the anime (I ( Read more... )

pg13, yuuram, conyuu, fanfiction, kyou kara maou

Comments 6

shirogiku December 20 2011, 21:40:42 UTC

Ahaha [this not a Hakkai-style "ahaha". this is a harmless "ahaha"]. How do I crit something I don't want to crit?

You even made the first person POVs work ♥

I really don't know, I liked the transition, and Wolfram was much more dignified than he could have been. I expected things to go uglier. There are many lines begging to be quoted and praised - but I'm a bit tired atm, gomen.

Have I mentioned ConYuu is ♥? Because it is the way you write it)))

I hate this new layout :/ elarielf December 26 2011, 07:42:20 UTC

Thanks so much for commenting! I'm glad it worked.

Wolfram was hard for me, because there's such a difference in his attitude from seasons 1 and 2 and season 3. In the first two, he's VERY jealous and paranoid, to the point that it's a running joke (and I get secondhand embarrassment). In the third season, everyone (including Yozak) keeps reminding him not to flip his lid when Yuuri 'flirts' with other people and he... doesn't. It makes him a duller character, but more mature. I figured that that, coupled with the fact that he's the first to notice things being 'not right' with the happy engagement would make him a lot calmer.

Or maybe he was just lazily written in season 3.

I wish I could just write Conyuu. But Wolfram and Yuuri are engaged right off the bat with Wolfram taking it seriously very soon after, so there's very little time to make Conyuu work without hurting someone. Dealing with Wolfram is hard. That's what makes Conyuu so difficult for me - how to not make Conrad or Yuuri seem like worse people than they are ( ... )

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