Like Father Like Son - Code Geass, Lelouch/Suzaku, Suzaku/Lelouch, Lelouch/Lelouch, NC-17

[elarielf]

Title: Like Father Like Son
Pairings: Lelouch/Suzaku, Suzaku/Lelouch, Lelouch/Lelouch, Lelouch/Suzaku/Lelouch, Suzaku/Lelouch/Lelouch. I think that's it.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Contains: INCUBUS! Threesomes, sexual teasing, incest(ish?), underage sex (again, ish), magical dubcon (to be on the safe side)
Word count: 10,000! Exactly!
Notes: Again,

Comments

[shirogiku]

Ahahaha, well-worth the wait <3<3<3 Seriously, all of the <3

I've been grinning non-stop while reading this. Such a treat!

Imagining Subaru commenting on Suzaku's sexual life made me snicker XD SO PROFESSIONAL, POOR BABY

I honestly wouldn't want the incest edited out, what with how I was the one who asked for it in the first place ;)

What deserves a special mention is how masterfully you handled two Lelouches, really making the best of them being two separate beings, so alike and yet not. Each one is distinctively himself. The incubus is cattish, playful and EVIL (his endearments ♥) and the human makes a nice descend into 'sin'.

I loved the banters, the jokes and the sex scenes. You managed to hit so many buttons, from the railing to the shower scene! :)

Of course, I'm a very biased reader (stop making that face! wait, never mind).

[elarielf]

You might be biased, but this was really for you, so it's the most important of biases. :p

I did try to make the Lelouchs seperate individuals, but they're much more similar in the final scene than different. :p

I'm SO GLAD YOU LIKED. ♥

[shirogiku]

Okay, after thinking it over with a fresh head I have a few continuity questions:

The anchor system:

1)Lelouch and 'Lelouch' struck a deal when Lelouch was 10.

Has 'Lelouch''s appearance been changing according to Lelouch's growth or did the incubus look the age he chose from the start?

2)What are the benefits of being an anchor?

Can I assume (I'll need it for the next story) that anchor ages much slowlier and stays young? Does it makes sense?

3)'Lelouch' has looked like Lelouch only for five years. The funny part is if we follow Sakura Kiss continuity... the numbers don't ass up. When Subaru was 16, 'Lelouch' had other anchor!

I assume:
4)'Lelouch' is only responding to that name while Lelouch stays his anchor.

I wonder:
5)Killing Lelouch is the quickest way to banish 'Lelouch'.

I conclude:
6)Lelouch, being a cambion on top of that, is a **huge** liability, especially if there are certain pissed off practitioners skulking about....

And this is the LONGER reply. XD

[elarielf]

1) Cambions are, according to my super-scholarly readings (...wiki), not-quite-human until the age of secen (at which point they're indistinguishable from humans). I originally wanted Lelouch to contract at seven, but given the maturity of the conditions, I felt that ten would be a more appropriate age (also, ten is an important age in Code Geass in general

[elarielf]

Thank you! I swear, this universe is more fun every time I revisit it. XD

As much as I like that idea...

[elarielf]

LOL, no. Actually, very no. The last thing Snapshots needs is MORE supernatural things. Or characters as dark as this (it's already much darker than I intended).

But the meeting of those two worlds would be... interesting to say the least. XD

Lelouch would lecture Lelouch and vice versa, and the Suzakus would go off to play peacefully together, and it would be adorable. ♥