holy shit, aly. i don't even have the words. this- this was just written so beautifully, i was kind of upset when it ended, lol. the imagery here is amazing, felt as if i was in their little world. i think i've said this before but your writing really flows well, i keep wanting to know what happens next. when they kissed asdbnskfh; i squee'd a little (a lot)!!!
"Lack of light skitters across their skin, on the breaths they take, give them shapes and illuminate the want in Henry’s fingers, tight on Donghae’s nape now." such a beautiful line! thank you so much for writing this! ;a; will continue to bug you for more forever and ever and ever like a little fangirl. i love you bye.
Wow..it's beautifully written!! The way you describe everything is perfect!! I can imagine it in my head like a movie..is this a oneshot? I need this to be chaptered if it is..nicely written^_^
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"Lack of light skitters across their skin, on the breaths they take, give them shapes and illuminate the want in Henry’s fingers, tight on Donghae’s nape now." such a beautiful line! thank you so much for writing this! ;a; will continue to bug you for more forever and ever and ever like a little fangirl. i love you bye.
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this is amazing. well done.
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