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eldrant

Asch/Guy NC-17: Immemorial

Jun 01, 2007 23:04

Title: Immemorial
Fandom: Tales of the Abyss
Word Count: 5200
Spoilers: Uh... takes place almost a month after the Absorption Gate.
Summary: Asch hadn't expected to find Guy in Grand Chokmah. Guy hadn't expected to find Asch. Neither expected their pants to come off after dinner. (WARNING: NC-17.)Notes: THIS IS A LOT LONGER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD ( Read more... )

nc-17, asch/guy, guy, asch

Comments 10

pic_murasaki June 2 2007, 11:09:37 UTC

Thank you very much!XD I'll be saving this and read it at home and make a better comment once I get back online again (like always).<3

If there's anything you want me to draw just tell me!*o*<3

manicalpha June 2 2007, 21:43:50 UTC

D:

*bows* I humble myself before your literary might.

eldrant June 4 2007, 04:12:29 UTC

*flails* It wasn't anything special, really, ^^;; I liked yours better, to be honest, o.o;

manicalpha June 4 2007, 15:54:55 UTC

D:< You're joking. This is like a bajillion times bettar. There is lovely story with it and the dialogue is great; mine just a hunk of smut. Ohhhh~ *mems and friends, if that's okay*

fontech June 4 2007, 15:57:32 UTC

But I love smut, >___> I can write story, but I'm not so good with the smut part xD Since the smut was a major part of the request, I wasn't entirely happy with it, >_>; Hence me being all *flail!* over yours.

HOWEVER! You are totally welcome to friend this lowly journal, though there's almost nothing on it. I've been trying to post more but LJ won't let me, ;___;

pic_murasaki June 6 2007, 02:19:45 UTC

First off, Happy Birthday?8D I hope I wans't late for the greeting...>.>;; It's already June 6th here. Ahehehe...

Thank you very much again.XD If there's anything you want me to draw (just NOT GuyXLuke), just ask, I owe you one.XD
Ahehe, onto my comments and I hope you forgive me for my Hate!GuyXLuke rants in betweens...>.>;;

*huggles*

The longer the better!XD I seriously enjoy the whole fic and looked forward to the smut.XD And the title sounds really cool.*o*<3 And you wrote Asch very well so you don't have to worry.x3

Just lemme ask... why 'Drillmaster'?XD

1 month break fic!<3 I've always imgined that Guy and Asch DID SOMETHING when they met!<3 Sadly, the 3rd Sara Yajima official ToA novel only got them together for a few minutes in Grand Chokma... Don't mind me, the scene was kinda heartbreaking.^^;; (Argh. GuyXLuke...)

Did I just see VanXGuy?^^<3<3<3 ( ... )

satoasato June 26 2007, 03:22:18 UTC

Lovely :D I enjoyed every part of the fic, specialy the NC-17 part. Congratulations!

orphen June 26 2007, 04:06:36 UTC

I really enjoyed this! I don't really have any criticism, though as I felt that everything was in order. I think the characterization is really good- especially because I think that writing a Guy/Asch fic where they would get along is quite difficult. That said, I think you pulled it off nicely! Thank you so much for sharing. :3