OMG THIS IS SUCH A WONDERFUL BIRTHDAY PRESENT! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
God, I can't wait to read more of this. I love this story! I'm already squeeing at you over AIM, but I can't squee enough! The collar and the saving and the beard and the promise and jksadhfjkhsdkfjahsdkjfhasfds!!
Ha ha, I see several familiar things~ Was it because you were editing it at the time? ILU, srsly. ♥
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WOO. I can definitely see a lot of Asch in your Luke; that casual arrogance, but also the way he just does nice things without any pretenses, and then gets embarassed if people point it out. Collar FTW. And Belkend scientist = yes, that would turn me off from the place, too. Sadness with Daddy Fabre and his promises, though. :C It's good to know that he gets better later on, but right now it's just... ,>_< Also, the way Asch was talking just before his kidnapping; did he know? :O
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Holy geez this story is amazing! I just read the entire thing today and I've been in awe through every chapter! The way you timed out the events was perfect! Writing just enough to capture it without drawing it out. I could really feel the emotion through Guy's eyes too. T___T <3333 It was wonderful! Everything from the detail of the attacks on the House of Gardios all the way up to Guy's first meeting with Luke, the collar, reuniting with Pere and Van, the touching ending scene and everything in between. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter of this! And seeing your changes of Guy's behavior towards Asch once he discovers that Luke is a replica (especially since there wasn't much interacting between Guy and Asch in the game).
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God, I can't wait to read more of this. I love this story! I'm already squeeing at you over AIM, but I can't squee enough! The collar and the saving and the beard and the promise and jksadhfjkhsdkfjahsdkjfhasfds!!
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Ha ha, I see several familiar things~ Was it because you were editing it at the time? ILU, srsly. ♥
OKAY onto reviewing:
WOO. I can definitely see a lot of Asch in your Luke; that casual arrogance, but also the way he just does nice things without any pretenses, and then gets embarassed if people point it out. Collar FTW. And Belkend scientist = yes, that would turn me off from the place, too. Sadness with Daddy Fabre and his promises, though. :C It's good to know that he gets better later on, but right now it's just... ,>_< Also, the way Asch was talking just before his kidnapping; did he know? :O ( ... )
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