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glenavera July 3 2012, 05:59:19 UTC
This is fantastic. Can't wait to read more.

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anactoria July 3 2012, 14:30:28 UTC
I was really hoping someone would fill that prompt, and this is just brilliant fun. :)

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jcporter1 July 3 2012, 15:40:49 UTC
Brilliant descriptions. Brilliant internal dialogue. Pacing like a steeplechase, my heart was hammering in my chest as I read along. Brilliant details. Great great work.

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signeh July 4 2012, 20:05:26 UTC
Very nicely done! Can't wait for part 2.

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calli_scribbles July 5 2012, 15:27:00 UTC
Locks are always amusing things if you know how they work. I know of a security system that can be disabled with a stick of gum. (my high school's... *shifty eyes*)

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