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Sep 05, 2010 04:16


Title: Baby, welcome to Hell.
Author: Read more... )

f: shinee, p: taemin/minho

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elebabeh September 9 2010, 22:00:26 UTC
towelettepower September 10 2010, 03:41:47 UTC
THANK YOU MY LOVELY DONGSAENG. <3
i like this version although it was quite short. :(
it's sooooo cute. so, that makes up for the short-ness in this chap. :333
seriously had me smiling throughout the chapter.
i really want to know why umma doesn't approve minho. =ooo
gah, i have so many questions. D:
you're killing me, bb. i'm always wondering what's going to happen nxt.
& OHHH THE ONJONGKEY. *///////*
i really like this. please update soon, bb. ♥

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elebabeh September 10 2010, 12:19:20 UTC
I like OnJongey a lot too~ <3
I will, unnie!

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meltrules September 10 2010, 01:43:52 UTC
LOL TAEMIN IS SO CUTE /squishes
yay you updatedd and its filled with omfg cute taem bunnies
update again soon! hmm who is hyuk's boyfriend? D:

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elebabeh September 10 2010, 12:18:04 UTC
Just somebody~ <3
Teehee, thanks fr commeting~

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gogothgirl September 10 2010, 03:00:27 UTC
I get what you mean with sick of making Key a crybaby. The thing is, he's a spitfire and feisty like whoa. So yeah, I love this smirking/cool/i-know-what-i-want version of Key. And omg, I love the scene where Key was sandwiched between Jonghyun and Jinki. They make a sweet picture ;) and the 2Min in this one was just lovely. No overly affectionate gestures too early in the story and u put in just the right sort of innocence.

Looking forward to see more of the secrets unravel.

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elebabeh September 10 2010, 12:17:25 UTC
Teehee~ My thoughts exactly. One or two crying sessions will be fine, but too manyand i'mjust going to ruin his reputation. OTL

I'll update soon~ <3

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aieveline September 12 2010, 11:56:30 UTC
omg, i couldn't find comment-button O_O but i found it! XD
awwww, Taemin is so sweet. but i wonder who is Taemin's father? XD Jonghyun or Jinki? they are living in threesome or what? XDDD
hahahah can't wait for another chapter! :3

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elebabeh September 23 2010, 01:17:50 UTC
welluhlolosomeoneaskedforonkeyandi'mabigjongkeypersonsoihadtosettlewithsomeonjongkeyloluhkthnxbaii

Teehee~ It's fine, I haven't been able to write chapters because of school.

...And lack of an actual laptop. /whistles innocently

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elebabeh September 23 2010, 20:29:42 UTC
Uh.
Let's just say it found a better place in life. >_>;;;

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