Yes. We do need a mathing 'Love Boat' icon. Unfortunately, as of yet, the only image of the Flying Dutchman that I've found, is that concept art one...
xDD Jack's everywhere! And he's just possessive because he doesn't want to be left out, fo' sho!
Ask someone. =3 For example, 'Author seeks screencaps of the Flying Dutchman. =< Will make both author and beta happy, and when author and beta are happy, the fics are posted faster. It's a win-win situation.'
Closetshipping doesn't really work here. Maybe something along the lines of cabinshipping. Or even just shipshipping, considering that there aren't any people landbound in the next film.
Ooooh. *wriggle* feeling the love now. I liked this when I read the first bits, now I REALLY like it. Things could get very interesting from here on, and it makes me happy Will finally admitted about the medallion (sort of) to Jack and Tia Dalma. I really like the idea of those two on the run together... which brings up an interesting question. What now is going to happen to Elizabeth if Jack and crew never have to go to Tortuga?
And as for your concern of Elizabeth... as one usually says; all will the answered, in time. :D We have a bit to go yet, as it is. Can't reveal where Lizzie darling and Norrington comes into it.
OMG. OMG. This is sooo intriguing&needs to continue. Da fic seems to be heavily AU, but totally carries the spirit of the movie. *g* Can`t wait to find out where the...er...less unconventional pairing came from :D
:DD Happy you think so! Thanks~ It is. *nod* I have a thing for exploring different ways and "might have beens"... xD But yay~ that it still carries the spirit of the moive! Heehee. :); The *cough* Jones/Will is... well, I've gotten stuck on it since I first saw the movie, so it sneaks in everywhere. :D; Whoo~
I was rereading them, wishing desperately that there'd be a new chapter to read soon, and reading the comments, and realized that I didn't review.
Very nice, though lacking enough Davy Jones (countered nicely by your conversation with otilu in the above comments; I like "Enough to know that he's got blue eyes" and Will's reaction to finding out Davy put his heart in a chest.
This is, as always, quite cool and awesome and other wonderful things. *wants more* *pokes you*
You could, if you wished, put in little tidbits of Davy POV . . . a paragraph at the beginning or in between scenes which contains his musings on Will or Jack, or memories of teasing Will like that, or just standing on deck watching the waves part before the ship. Maybe he's watching the Kraken take apart yet another ship or some such.
If you like. I noticed there was a Beckett scene in there *gags* so suddenly dropping in a Davy paragraph (which of course didn't give anything away) wouldn't be too out of place.
*pokes your beta* Mine's being like that too . . . but then I handed her four things to review all at once, so partially my fault.
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We need a matching 'Love Boat' icon now, don't we? =3 I need an image.
Also: I just realised that Jack is acting possessive of both Tia AND Will in this chapter. o.o My Jack/Will senses must be dead or something.
>> ... << Jack/Will/Tia for the win!
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Yes. We do need a mathing 'Love Boat' icon. Unfortunately, as of yet, the only image of the Flying Dutchman that I've found, is that concept art one...
xDD Jack's everywhere! And he's just possessive because he doesn't want to be left out, fo' sho!
*cackle*
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Closetshipping doesn't really work here. Maybe something along the lines of cabinshipping. Or even just shipshipping, considering that there aren't any people landbound in the next film.
Jack: We need a closet on this ship.
Will: *oar*
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xDD Then, shoulnd't 'shipshipping' really be an all-cast orgy? Hut/shackshipping? Since they were all in her hut at one point. xD
*giggle* Ohgod~ *squee* So cute.
Will: There is a pantry... FORGET I SAID ANYTHING.
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Norrington: *beams*
Will: *feels a strange disturbance in the Force, as though a thousand authors cried out in pain and... were silenced*
Jones: *beams*
Although I'm guessing that they'd end up looking for her, and since Will and Elizabeth know only two ports by name, she won't have gone far.
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And as for your concern of Elizabeth... as one usually says; all will the answered, in time. :D We have a bit to go yet, as it is. Can't reveal where Lizzie darling and Norrington comes into it.
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Heehee. :); The *cough* Jones/Will is... well, I've gotten stuck on it since I first saw the movie, so it sneaks in everywhere. :D;
Whoo~
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It...er...does happen.
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I was sure I reviewed this chapter!
I was rereading them, wishing desperately that there'd be a new chapter to read soon, and reading the comments, and realized that I didn't review.
Very nice, though lacking enough Davy Jones (countered nicely by your conversation with otilu in the above comments; I like "Enough to know that he's got blue eyes" and Will's reaction to finding out Davy put his heart in a chest.
This is, as always, quite cool and awesome and other wonderful things. *wants more* *pokes you*
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*nod* Unfortunately Jones is a bit hard to work into the chapters at places... and will continue to be so... :/ Dammnit,
And there is more forthcoming! :o Fourth chapter is in beta. I need to poke my beta... :D;
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If you like. I noticed there was a Beckett scene in there *gags* so suddenly dropping in a Davy paragraph (which of course didn't give anything away) wouldn't be too out of place.
*pokes your beta* Mine's being like that too . . . but then I handed her four things to review all at once, so partially my fault.
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Blech, yah. But I just wanted a scene with Beckett to get the mention of ships being out on the ocean and whatnot.
I have poked my beta. *solemn nod* I hope for results soon.
XD Four things is a bit much to ask for them quickly, I would think, yes...
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