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Title: Fish in a Barrel

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[kyra_neko_rei]

Love it, love it, love it.

The reference to Elizabeth was spot-on and perfect Jack, and this:

Jones pressed down slightly, his touch becoming that more solid. Not so much a warning, as a show of power.

made me shiver.

Davy keeping distance from the jar of dirt was hilarious. More more more more more!

[electrainverted]

:D! Thank you!

I rather liked it myself, and thanks, again, for reminding me. I really should have thought on it earlier...

Yess... It felt just right to add that. So, happy it did enhance that part.

xD Honestly, that jar didn't get to DO anything in the movie, so mostly it just appeared as a rather useless (and only partly useful) exposition and plot-device. So, I thought I had to make a show of it actually doing what Tia said it would do.

:D! As soon as possible. Think you could stand doing me the favour of further beta for later chapters, when they come?

[kyra_neko_rei]

I would be honored.

*jumps up and down happily at the prospect of getting to read this stuff first*

[electrainverted]

Yay~ This is good.

:D

[loony_sasquatch]

Any chance there's more of this brilliant fic soming soo? Very soon? Forgive my impatience, but there's not much out there like this right now :)

[electrainverted]

:D As soon as possible!
I have to admit, it might take a while, simply because of what needs to happen next on the Dutchman. I don't feel like doing it exactly the same, but changing it won't be easy, either. But... I'm hoping for a stroke of genius to hit me, or something. :D;

[loony_sasquatch]

*pokes you*

Any chance you're still writing this great fic? (Fish in a Barrel)

I'd like to read more of it, lol!

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Unfortunately, I still can't figure out how to do the Dutchman thing. Thing is, I know exactly what'll happen after it (everything is planned), but... the bit with the Dutchman is frustratingly hard. D; There will certainly be more, but gaah. *hits it* ^^;