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This is what happens when you're coming up with myths and legends concerning the founder of a (in)famous pirate port. Your brain just won't let it stay as "legends" and starts to work with figuring out what is myth and what is reality
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Hah, yeah, Kruviya dearest looses her childhood awfully quick... But we're not interested in seeing her running around chasing butterflies in the hills, or sneaking into the tailor's garden to kiss with Tofa... xD At least not in this story.
It's cool that the style fits, since, eh... I seem to be unable to not write more or less poetically. XDD
And, I just gotta say, my reaction when I read the part of your post concerning Kruviya's fight with the bandit? 8D <3
Because I hadn't actually had any of that in mind, I was just writing so the scene/fight would be dangerous, would be violent (as it should be). I just think it's so cool you got all that out of it and liked it~
Besides, the fanservice in fighting won't come until the Sessan princess comes in. XD (Well, seriosuly, those will be dangerous too, of course, but I want to attempt sexual tension, too...)
*followed your suggestion* I don't mind nitpicks, or suggestions to make things hopefully better. x33
Whoo~ :DD
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