Fic: Very Unsafe

[electraroad]

Title: Very Unsafe
Word Count: 1,643
Summary: A piece of Webgott. Allusions to a previous relationship. Please comment!
Warning: I own nothing, am making no money, and mean no disrespect. It is based off of the characters and not the real men.

Very Unsafe:

He finds you alone. Outside, leanig up against a wall, cigarette in hand. Smoke and

Comments

[missdunham]

*dies*

I think i just fell in love with Webgott. All over again.

<333 This was FANTASTIC!!
<33333333333

[electraroad]

Wow, thank you so much! That really means a lot to me, especially coming from you. Your work made into a shifty/tab convert!

[missdunham]

Haha xD I love Shifty/Tab ^_^
Oh, now i have a need to write them again :P Thank you :D

[skyearth85]

I finally I re-read it. The first time I was listening the Evanescence and... well *facepalm* (note for myself: NEVER read a webgott listening Evanescence).

Your Joe is a little off (for my personal "vision" of him), but I think you have catch a quite perfect voice for Web.

I'm waiting for a new webgott work from you.

[electraroad]

Lol, I will make a note of that: no evanescence while reading or -probably- writing Webgott, it would come out far to angsty.
Yeah, I'm better with Web, that is why most of my stuff is from his pov. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[teaspoonery]

There are a few mistakes in here (among which 'knew' instead of 'new', 'pining' instead of 'pinning', 'you' instead of 'your' and some wicked changes of tenses) but other than that it's a really good ficlet. I love how it's in 2nd person because, even though half of the time it doesn't work, it does now and it puts some kind of distance between Webster and Liebgott you probably wouldn't have managed in 1st or 3rd person.

Anyhow, I would've loved reading this proof-read and fixed by a beta. I do think it would do the fic more justice to be error-free. :)