You made these two so believable, Jensen as a cocky-as-hell F1 driver and Jared as an adorable surgeon.
I also loved that the ending felt off-tempo. We weren't sure if there'd be a bad guy reveal, or if there'd be fallout and mayhem from whoever sabotaged Jen in the first place, so in the last act I found myself in this weird place where I didn't know what the climax scene would be. Way to keep us guessing!
I'm really glad you enjoyed this, and that the characters felt believable! Makes me very happy. :D
I'm glad the ending worked for you. Initially, I'd assumed the sabotage would be a bigger part of the story, but (unusually for me) the story kept being about the relationship rather than the plot, and that kind of faded into the background. It's nice to hear that the imbalance didn't act as too much of a disadvantage.
You had me at F1 (its a weakness, I know) and then the doctor!Jared was just a bonus and I read the story with one breath and it was good and the pacing was fast, but not too fast and I loved that Jared took his job very seriously BUT I am wondering who wanted to kill Jensen? Will there be a sequel or timestamps or something? Because Jensen is still in danger so .. yeah, but anywho, I enjoyed the story! Tnx for sharing S.
That was wonderful, and such impressive detail! Any chance for a timestamp because I'd really like to know who was trying to kill Jensen. Thank you for the great read :)
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I also loved that the ending felt off-tempo. We weren't sure if there'd be a bad guy reveal, or if there'd be fallout and mayhem from whoever sabotaged Jen in the first place, so in the last act I found myself in this weird place where I didn't know what the climax scene would be. Way to keep us guessing!
Thanks for sharing this! Great job!
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I'm glad the ending worked for you. Initially, I'd assumed the sabotage would be a bigger part of the story, but (unusually for me) the story kept being about the relationship rather than the plot, and that kind of faded into the background. It's nice to hear that the imbalance didn't act as too much of a disadvantage.
Thanks again for reading and commenting!
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Thanks for sharing!
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Tnx for sharing
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I hope there will be a timestamp. I'd thought the sabotage would be a larger part of the plot, but the relationship rather took over the story!
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Thank you for the great read :)
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There is certainly a chance for a timestamp, as I'd like to explore that a little more too. I think I have to recover from this first, though. ;)
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