this is a brand new problem, a problem without any clues

Jun 24, 2011 20:55

PROCRASTINATION TIEMZ.

Let's have a commentfic promptfest! :D

RULES:
-> Post prompts. (POST ALL THE PROMPTS. YOU ARE NOT SPAMMING EVEN IF YOU THINK YOU ARE.)
-> Fill prompts. (See above parentheses.)
-> Lather, rinse, repeat.

ETA: For ease of access, it would be great if you could mark fills in the subject line :)

FILL LIST:
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trying new things

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this girl's a silhouette, can't you see? // sweetpea!emma frost [1/2] electrumqueen June 25 2011, 00:47:39 UTC
her name on the form is frost, emma. she stares at it for a long moment, her father's spidery hand, blue ink on white paper, like a tattoo. their hands on her are too hot, too clammy. their thoughts clamour through her mind; nice ass, i wonder if she's a screamer, great tits, i bet she is.

she is unaccustomed to people acting on their thoughts, but she is not. unprepared. she knew this would be the endgame of all these voices in her head, her father's cool detached stare.

"welcome to lennox house," the orderly on her right sneers, "we'll have a good time, you and i. sweetpeashe tries to claw his eyes out. it is not, she thinks, an auspicious start ( ... )

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Re: this girl's a silhouette, can't you see? // sweetpea!emma frost [2/2] electrumqueen June 25 2011, 00:49:28 UTC
[reposted for accuracy of heading]

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she cannot keep out of baby's mind, through all of the plan; map, fire, key, knife. it seems like a good plan; solid, reasonable. (baby is the sane one, that is. baby is the one who has not spent what feels like forever with chaos running through her brain. baby is the oasis in the desert.)

she hates watching baby fuck them. instead she slips into the back of baby's mind and helps her fight monsters, whispers, i will always be by your side.

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they destroy rocket and sweetpea screams so loud emma hears it, feels it, screams too.

she reaches for rocket's mind but there is nothing there. it is dull and blank and empty and nothing like her friend.

she thinks, i should have been there, i should have held your hand.rocket can no longer smile ( ... )

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Re: this girl's a silhouette, can't you see? // sweetpea!emma frost [2/2] scorpiod1 June 25 2011, 01:03:38 UTC
jfc.

Marry me. I love the descriptions of everyone's heads, the walls around Sweet Pea but the compassion too (her affection for Rocket, the way she gets Dr. Gorski is trying to help), her love for Baby Doll ("I will always be at your side" = <3333333). Everything.

she gets up, undamaged, beautiful. she feels like she is wrapped in diamond.

Omg. This is perfect and glorious. All of it. AND THE ENDING *_____* I LOVE EVERYTHING YOU CHOSE TO BE (AND TO WRITE).

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