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Jun 24, 2011 20:55

PROCRASTINATION TIEMZ.

Let's have a commentfic promptfest! :D

RULES:
-> Post prompts. (POST ALL THE PROMPTS. YOU ARE NOT SPAMMING EVEN IF YOU THINK YOU ARE.)
-> Fill prompts. (See above parentheses.)
-> Lather, rinse, repeat.

ETA: For ease of access, it would be great if you could mark fills in the subject line :)

FILL LIST:
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trying new things

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fill // watch your back, i'm nobody's girlfriend jada_jasmine June 25 2011, 18:25:18 UTC
watch your back, I’m nobody’s girlfriend. raven (/angel).

Raven falls asleep at night dreaming of Charles and Erik and Hank and Darwin and Alex and Sean and Moira.

She wakes up in a too-hot room. Her bed is too firm and she can’t remember where the bathroom is.

When she turns to her other side, Angel’s in the other twin bed, hair mussed and wings wrapped tight across her shoulders.

Raven says, did you miss us?

The room is too quiet; Raven hears something break down the hall and flinches.

Angel says, yes.

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When Angel left, Azazel dropped them in the submarine in a cloud of red smoke and she choked on her tears.

She stutters, slowly, painfully through - Why did you kill him?

And Shaw says, Emma, calm her down with the flick of his wrist. His face is annoyed, no sympathy, and something curls in the pit of Angel’s stomach.

He hands her a pair of leather shorts and walks out of the room and Angel thinks, oh god what I have done. Riptide smiles at her; she misses Sean ( ... )

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Re: fill // watch your back, i'm nobody's girlfriend electrumqueen June 26 2011, 01:18:25 UTC
ugh this is GLORIOUS. everything about it is pitch-perfect, OH ANGEL. OH RAVEN.

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Re: fill // watch your back, i'm nobody's girlfriend jada_jasmine June 26 2011, 05:57:41 UTC
thank you! I GOT YOU TO LIKE ANGEL. WHEEEE. maybe you'll wrote Angel/Sean now? Fingers crossed. I haven't told you how much fun I'm having with this which is A LOT. We should do this more often.

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Re: fill // watch your back, i'm nobody's girlfriend scorpiod1 July 2 2011, 08:53:12 UTC
This makes me SO HAPPY *___* I LOVE how you write Angel and give her characterization and depth and the scene when she first arrives with Shaw and Emma and Riptide is just wonderful. The scene with Raven and Angel in their room is so intimate and sensual and I just LOVE how Angel loves to fly. And the last line is GORGEOUS, but this one really gets to me the most:

Back at the facility, Raven and her shared a room. They laughed about boys and did each other’ makeup and it was normal, kind of.

*loves all over*

(um, sorry for the late reply! I lost internet for a few days /o\ )

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