A Secret Shared - Chapter 14

Aug 24, 2012 12:15

Title: A Secret Shared ( Read more... )

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malfunkshon August 24 2012, 12:02:51 UTC
Wooooow
So happy to find another chapter today :D

I'm impressed by Isaac's forgiveness - yes ok Taylor wasn't himself because of the medication, but it's still pretty awesome that Isaac still lets him in the house, let alone invite him for dinner. Good Isaac! We like ;-)

Loved the bit of humour here:

"We were interrupted from continuing by the whirlwind that was my daughter bursting into the room and jumping into my lap.
“Ow, Penny, watch where you’re jumping” I scolded.
“No more kids for you.” Zac chuckled in response."

hahahahah well clearly THAT HASN'T WORKED ;-)

Great story. I love your story because it's different from all others - not the usual love triangle, or rather, love seesaw - up, down, up, down, which I am finding increasingly boring. This is a totally different dynamic and I hope you will carry on exploring Taylor's mental illness as it's really, really fascinating.

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eleflowerpot August 24 2012, 14:39:50 UTC
Aw, thankyou!
Isaac is only behaving that way because he thinks it'll make it easier for Louisa to cope, believe me he's still seething inside.
I'm trying to work out how to incorporate more of Taylor's illness but can't quite get it to fit at the moment as i'm only running a couple of chapters ahead of myself now.

Also, thankyou for liking the story for what it's become. I started out trying to write Zaylor but I found it quite difficult so i'm glad that the turns I've taken have been ok.

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bittersweet_luv August 24 2012, 13:51:33 UTC
I have to give kudos to Ike for being open and willing to not just simply tolerate Tay but to actually being willing to move on. The pain and guilt must be etched clearly onto Tay's face.
And how will Louisa react? My heart goes out to her.

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eleflowerpot August 24 2012, 14:41:58 UTC
Things aren't 'over' yet. He's willing to move on for his wife, but whether he actually can is another matter.

Thankyou once again for reading and commenting!

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elizabeth_ald August 24 2012, 17:10:34 UTC
Poor Taylor. Even if they move the studio, I don't think his guilt would ever go away.. Especially if my predictions for this story prove true. It will only get more complicated.. :-\

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eleflowerpot August 24 2012, 17:23:20 UTC
I don't think his guilt can ever go away, he's just thinking of ways he could minimise it :(

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iwontbeafool August 25 2012, 05:51:04 UTC
This is so sad. I hope things get better for them. And can I say that Taylor having difficulty on not seeing Zac often is so sweet and cute? I hope for Lou to be ok though. And for Ike, I feel bad that he felt like that. And it's a good thing that he opened up to them...

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eleflowerpot August 25 2012, 19:45:45 UTC
Yeah, Isaac opening up is definitely a positive to come out of this situation

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