Interesting... Kind if wish Zaylor got stuck at the studio alone, but maybe another time! I hope with therapy and everything that Taylor and Lou can come to some sort of middle ground and be family and close again. :-\
Wow, I didn't expect any of this. I'm confused, but in a good way, because you've taken the story into yet another unexpected turn, and I like it!
I liked the tone of Taylor's 'voice', you've managed to keep it consistent with Part 1, it doesn't sound like a totally different character. Because of course he's sorry for what he's done but it's still him.
When are these 3 guys going to notice that she's preggers though? How blind can they be? A woman always notices these things... even I (I don't have children and I'm not interested in baby stuff)... even I always figure it out. Come on guys, wake up!!!
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I liked the tone of Taylor's 'voice', you've managed to keep it consistent with Part 1, it doesn't sound like a totally different character. Because of course he's sorry for what he's done but it's still him.
When are these 3 guys going to notice that she's preggers though? How blind can they be? A woman always notices these things... even I (I don't have children and I'm not interested in baby stuff)... even I always figure it out. Come on guys, wake up!!!
Very very curious to see what happens next!
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