A Secret Unleashed - Chapter 4

[eleflowerpot]

Chapter 4

Louisa’s POV

Livid didn’t even begin to describe how I was feeling. Their disregard for their family disgusted me. I shouldn’t have been surprised by Taylor and Zac’s reluctance to answer calls from their wives, they enjoyed any possible opportunity to escape from them. But I was disappointed in Isaac. I knew we weren’t together any more

Comments

[elizabeth_ald]

Oh no!! Seeing it from her POV made me think she may be ok... Ugh just.. No. Not Lou! :-(

[eleflowerpot]

Don't write her off just yet...

[malfunkshon]

Woah!!!! You almost had me thinking that Louisa had gone badass with this one! Then I thought that maybe it was Kate or Natalie in the car. I went through all possible scenarios...!

And now...you leave me with a cliffhanger O__O [Ok sorry I did that too with my last chapter]. But you'd better update soon because I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. This story is the most unpredictable one I'm reading!

And more Isaac soon, please!!!

[eleflowerpot]

The next chapter is an Isaac one and I'll probably post on Friday.

Louisa couldn't be badass if she tried...that's Isaac's job surely?!

And everyone loves a cliffhanger don't they?!

[malfunkshon]

Badass Isaac... please stop those dirty thoughts from entering my head, it's distracting me!!!

[eleflowerpot]

Lol!
I certainly don't want to distract you (especially if it's from TI or Eternity!)