A Secret Unleashed - Chapter 5

[eleflowerpot]

Chapter 5

Isaac’s POV

The darkness was all enveloping now. Many of the street lights were out and the headlights of my car were hardly cutting through the density of the gloom. Whole streets were at the mercy of the shadows, the power having being knocked out. I should have been driving more cautiously given the circumstances but as every minute

Comments

[elizabeth_ald]

Ok I'm holding out hope for Lou here! Loved the last line so much! Poor Isaac..

[eleflowerpot]

Thankyou so much!

[malfunkshon]

Oh man this is truly brilliant. Like a slow-motion scene from a movie. This is almost a *script*.
I can feel Isaac's anguish, I can even feel the burn in his lungs after the sprint he did, the stitch, everything.... Zac picking him up in the trunk..

And I love it how now Louisa is Isaac's wife again: he had to almost lose her to realise what he really had with her. ARHGHHlksjskldsl I'm suffering...!!!!!!
And why is Isaac so goddamn hot in this story? You're not even describing him. He just ACTS HOT!!!!!!!

Oh maaaan.....

The only possible improvement to this story at this point would be to have MORE of it. No pressure, but keep writing ..

[eleflowerpot]

I find that life is often that way, you have to have a sense of loss before you can really appreciate what you have...

As for Isaac being hot...thankyou! Although I think that's more to do with how we think of him as oppose to what I've written.

Already done the next 2 chapters (although they're short as always). But struggling to write at the moment due to work so i've kinda been storing them up in case this happened!

As always thankyou for taking the time to read and comment, always brings a smile to my face to see what you think :)