A Secret Unleashed - Chapter 8

[eleflowerpot]

Title: A Secret Unleashed

Author: eleflowerpot

Fandom: Hanson

Pairings: Taylor/ Zac, Isaac/ OFC

Summary: Third instalment of the ‘Secret’ series

Warnings: Some content may be adult

Chapter 8

Taylor’s POV

Furious…fucking furious. To think she’d dragged me here for cradle cap…cradle cap! Of all the over-reactions… She’d done it on purpose I was sure,

Comments

[elizabeth_ald]

Ugh I'm just hurting for all of them.. Except Natalie. In really hoping Lou pulls through this.. And I'm really curious as to what game Natalie had planned that Taylor hinted at...

[eleflowerpot]

I'm glad Natalie comes across as horrible! Don't know what she's like in real life but in my writing I always seem to want to paint her as a bitch!

[malfunkshon]

Finally I got to read this - your updates are saved for when I'm not totally comatose, you see!
This is so good. I loved reading a chapter from Taylor's POV.

The first part is absolutely brilliant, with Taylor reduced to a trembling mess by his dominating, scheming wife.

"If only the worlds media could see me now, reduced to a quivering mess by the idea of maddening my wife any further."

Under the thumb!

"She was angered that all her pawns weren’t in their rightful positions doing her bidding." --> Natalie, the Machiavellian genius! Brilliant.

The hospital scene was really poignant, with Isaac talking to his wife and his brothers just standing by, helplessly. But they are there at least. It's kind of bittersweet to see the brothers together in these circumstances (indirectly caused by one of them)
I'm wondering if something good will come out of all this tragedy, and maybe this is the chance for Taylor and Isaac to be close again?

Don't keep me waiting for too long. I need MORE!!!!

[eleflowerpot]

Hehe - glad you like schemeing, bitchy Natalie. I know it seems a bit cruel but she's needs to be like that in order to make Zaylor seem like a more viable option!

I'll be honest, I'm not exactly sure what's coming next! I did have my plans but I've kind of taken a different route so the next bit wouldn't make sense any more. Also, what I had planned was definitely not a happy ending for any of them so it's probably a good thing I've changed my mind!