The Beginning - Part 2

[eleflowerpot]

Part 2

“We’ve always been close, you know that…in the same way that you two are close.”

They said nothing, only exchanging a look. I needed to make them understand… I turned to face Isaac and his warm smile gave me all the confidence I needed.

“It started years ago, we were fourteen…”

The storm was raging outside. I hated storms, had done since our

Comments

[zacgirl1]

I've just started reading this story and I love it so far :)

I hope you update soon!!!

[eleflowerpot]

Thankyou!
I'm still very unconfident as a writer so it's good to know when people enjoy what I've done :)

[daisynala87]

Yay I can't wait for more:)

[eleflowerpot]

Thankyou for reading :)

[elizabeth_ald]

I'm excited to see where this goes!

[eleflowerpot]

Thankyou for reading :)
(i'm excited too ;p )

[malfunkshon]

Oh my goodness....
I love this story...it could have gone horribly wrong in someone else's hands. It could have been borderline abuse, but that first scene was so sweet and subtle anyway, you don't question for a moment that he loves her, he's not a creep who just wants to take advantage of his twin sister.

I liked how you seamlessly moved on from that first scene and condensed all the rest without making it sound rushed - it has the rhythm of a short story, in a good way.

And that final twist! YESSSSSSSSS
You'll have us all begging for more if you don't update soon....

[eleflowerpot]

I'm glad it didn't come across as seedy or untoward. They have a connection and have 'just' taken it to the next level. Besides, it's Isaac, he was only ever going to be cast as 'the good guy' by me ;p