The beginning - Part 3

[eleflowerpot]

Part 3

Taylor’s POV

My mouth opened in horror as I looked from Isaac to Zac. How could he know?! Isabelle gasped in shock, Isaac just smiled slyly.

“You two?! After you’re reaction to us?!” I could understand her disbelief. Yes we’d had an unusual reaction to the disclosure of her relationship with Isaac considering we were doing almost the exact

Comments

[elizabeth_ald]

Aw.. As taboo as it all is, I'm glad they all seem to have someone they've gravitated to. Zac's comment to Ike about him sleeping with their sister makes me wonder about how he feels towards Taylor.. They haven't slept together and he seems disgusted by the thought of that. Makes me feel sorry for Taylor. Hope they can all work it out :-)

[eleflowerpot]

All will be revealed in the coming chapters! ;p

[zacgirl1]

This is getting very interesting. I hope the time they are spending apart help them sort things out.

Update soon please:)

[eleflowerpot]

Hmmm...I will reveal nothing as yet! ;p

[malfunkshon]

This is one of the most original and interesting stories at the moment. Again, you made it a little bit more different from the rest with the detail of Zaylor not 'consuming' (do we assume that they at least do other stuff? BJs or 'wanky wanky' as one of my friends would say :D )

Zac's perspective is very intriguing, the fact that he was so harsh towards Ike and Isabelle hints at something, maybe envy...because deep down that's what he wants from Taylor but he's being denied?

I absolutely loved this bit:

"As I was rambling to him about unrequited love it’d hit me, the person who could love me unconditionally was sat across from me, listening to my sob story about a girl I could barely remember the name of."

I can almost hear the penny drop at that point.

This story is so promising and it makes me very VERY CROSS that you still keep so quiet about your writing. Young lady, we need to get promoting!!!! ;-)

[eleflowerpot]

Yes, Zac and Tay definitely 'do' everything else but both have their own reasons for not going further with eachother...

Thankyou for having faith in me and my writing :)

[daisynala87]

I hope you can forgive me I know I'm behind on reading this. I love it because it's so different from the other stories I have read. I love it:)

[eleflowerpot]

Of course!

There are so many stories that I want to read but just don't get the time at the moment.

Glad you're enjoying it :)