I'm so glad this story is back! My favourite Isaac (other than mine lol) is baaaaack!!! and he's more badass than ever!
Ok I'll come down as I'm totally missing the point, as this chapter is from Taylor and Zac's POVs. I just got a bit excited about the return of the only other Isaac-heavy story out there at the moment (that I know of).
Anyway.
Another surprise after the twist from the last chapter - Zac felt the same about Louisa as Taylor. I did NOT see that coming at all; and yet it makes perfect sense, doesn't it? The only other 'possible' love, someone who knows their secret, who understands them, who is one of the guys. And dare I say, with the added element of one uppmanship towards Isaac?
"But Louisa…you could dream that you could be together, dream that she’d love you back and you’d be together…that she’d choose you over Isaac.” <--- total headfuck territory, right? And so perfectly described
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OMG thankyou! So glad that it makes sense why Tay and Zac both have feelings for Louisa, didn't want it to seem odd. And you're right about it also being a way of 'getting one over' one Isaac, he's the oldest, feels like the leader and both resent it, despite the fact that out of the three of them he is the one that's listened to least, and in some ways respected least as well (i.e. leaving him out of various things/ knowledge).
Hopefully have another chapter next week depending on work, although my chapters are far shorter than yours so I can turn them out a little quicker. Wish I could have the skills to write longer chapters but oh well, beggers can't be choosers and all that!
Yay! Glad you are back and CONGRATULATIONS!! All the best to you both! :-)
I was not expecting Taylor's confession to Zac to go so smoothly. I am very nervous to see how talking to Ike goes though. The fact that Zac was so understanding with Taylor though... Taylor better never screw up or think of ever letting Zac go.
Well this one comes as a bit of a surprise. I never expected Zac to take this so extremely well. I mean I know he loves Taylor, but he's admitted to having feelings for Louisa. So the thought that she was raped should leave him more of a mess. I know he knows Tay's story and he's aware of the whole 'I didn't take my drugs', but jeez. It's still rape! Well I guess we will see how Louisa will take all of this on board.
I miss this! Ok, first off, I do really admire Zac for taking care of Taylor and understanding him and standing beside him no matter what. And for both of them to be in love with the same girl? Gosh, that's a revelation I am not expecting!
This story is getting more interesting...
I'm glad you're back, coz I want to read more of this!
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Ok I'll come down as I'm totally missing the point, as this chapter is from Taylor and Zac's POVs. I just got a bit excited about the return of the only other Isaac-heavy story out there at the moment (that I know of).
Anyway.
Another surprise after the twist from the last chapter - Zac felt the same about Louisa as Taylor. I did NOT see that coming at all; and yet it makes perfect sense, doesn't it? The only other 'possible' love, someone who knows their secret, who understands them, who is one of the guys. And dare I say, with the added element of one uppmanship towards Isaac?
"But Louisa…you could dream that you could be together, dream that she’d love you back and you’d be together…that she’d choose you over Isaac.” <--- total headfuck territory, right? And so perfectly described ( ... )
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Hopefully have another chapter next week depending on work, although my chapters are far shorter than yours so I can turn them out a little quicker. Wish I could have the skills to write longer chapters but oh well, beggers can't be choosers and all that!
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I was not expecting Taylor's confession to Zac to go so smoothly. I am very nervous to see how talking to Ike goes though. The fact that Zac was so understanding with Taylor though... Taylor better never screw up or think of ever letting Zac go.
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Wow what a great chapter. I didn’t think Taylor would explain himself so easy like he did.
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I know he knows Tay's story and he's aware of the whole 'I didn't take my drugs', but jeez. It's still rape!
Well I guess we will see how Louisa will take all of this on board.
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This story is getting more interesting...
I'm glad you're back, coz I want to read more of this!
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