Hey, I'm reading the story and loving it so far! But I just thought you might be interested in some of the spelling I've picked up. Not many, and we can understand what you mean to say, but they just slightly jarred me in the reading momentum. You could probably delete this comment after you changed them ^-^
...Therians shifting which contacts in that haven’t ended well. Which = with
“You can feel it, can’t you?” Jared asked, a not of excitement in his voice. not = note
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...Therians shifting which contacts in that haven’t ended well.
Which = with
“You can feel it, can’t you?” Jared asked, a not of excitement in his voice.
not = note
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