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Feb 10, 2005 21:10
"When i look at you,
my heart aches,
but i dont know why,
no,
im not really,
in love at all,
its just my mind,
playin tricks on me,"
um....country western song? w/e, enough procrastinating, see ya.
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doktor_quack
February 10 2005, 21:26:27 UTC
Remove the commas after "really" and "mind." Put a period after "me"
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elementaldragon
February 10 2005, 21:41:08 UTC
thanks for the lesson in punctuation professor quack.
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