Comments | elendiari22: Look, I wrote a fic!

elendiari22

Look, I wrote a fic!

Feb 06, 2007 07:40

Title: In This Auld House
Characters: Guess ;)
Warnings: Un-beta'd
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don't own anything!
Author's Note: I've been feeling like trying my hand at this, so I took a break from the original fiction binge I've been on and wrote this last night. Let me know what you think!

( In This Auld House )

fanfics, harry potter

Comments 13

littleredduckie February 6 2007, 16:06:35 UTC

Wow. That last line is a killer and so completely perfect. I think you've definitely got Sirius' voice down.

elendiari22 February 6 2007, 19:45:19 UTC

Thanks! I was trying for a dark tone, and I'm really happy with how it turned out.

just_ann_now February 7 2007, 11:19:04 UTC

That's a remarkable piece of writing. I'm not familiar enough with the Potterverse to have really recognized it, but your descriptions are very vivid and wonderfully creepy - it's truly a haunted house, haunted by centuries of memories.

elendiari22 February 7 2007, 17:30:14 UTC

Thank you! I'm not to good at Potterverse myself, so I figure it can be read as Sirius walking through his family house and reflecting on what freaks they all were, or a piece of original fiction. :)

just_ann_now February 7 2007, 22:50:56 UTC

It works wonderfully well as original fiction. Also, have you heard of this? Now that you're writing again, perhaps you'll be inspired!

elendiari22 February 7 2007, 23:17:08 UTC

Wow, that contest sounds awesome and really creepy. I'm going to have to think about that. Thanks!

cunien February 7 2007, 11:48:05 UTC

Wow, beautiful!
x.

elendiari22 February 7 2007, 17:30:30 UTC

Thank you!

hiyacynth February 7 2007, 13:14:44 UTC

Ugh, poor Sirius!!

Here, the finely wrought crown of diamonds that had belonged to a murdered bride, there an inlaid pocket watch that ticked the minutes until your death, summing up your remaining time in its steady tick, tick, tick.

That's just creepy, creepy writing. Great job!

elendiari22 February 7 2007, 17:31:52 UTC

Thanks! Creepy is so much fun to write. I blame the Ph.D and his knack of being all, "Merry Christmas, here's a gothic novel". But it's fun. :)

allie_meril February 8 2007, 00:24:00 UTC

Wow! This is awesome, El! You do a great gothic-y atmosphere. ;)

“Someday I will make my own riddles,” his brother had said. “I will lead people on such a chase as will be worthy of song and adulation. Would that not be fantastic?”

I. Love. That.

Regulus=R.A.B.

For in a house such as this, no one truly left.

What a great last line.

Awesome job!

elendiari22 February 8 2007, 00:38:16 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, R.A.B is totally Regulus. I can't wait until the next book.