fic: pokemon: Halfway round, Hilda/Waitress Aurora

[eleniatallah]

Title: Halfway round
Rating: G
Genre: Gen, h/c, romance? idk 
Pairing: Hilda/Waitress Aurora
Summary: You need two people to ride the ferris wheel. And Aurora needed a riding partner, and she found one in Hilda.
Notes: Written for a prompt on the kink meme. My first ever kink meme fill, hee. <3 Okay, so I've shipped my player character with the

Comments

[koushi]

Okay, so I've shipped my player character with the Waitress Aurora who she rode the ferris wheel with for all of autumn since forever

EXCUSE YOU

HAVE YOU NOT READ MY POST

SHE WAS MINE FIRST

[eleniatallah]

OH HALE NO I WILL TOTES FIGHT YOU FOR HER.

AND NO I DID NOT SEE THAT IN YOUR POST SO... YEAH

[koushi]

YEAH BITCH LET'S TAKE THIS OUTSIDE

But seriously, when winter came, I was SO upset by this Rich Boy replacing her. I WAS LIKE WHERE IS MY DARLING AURORA. :(

[eleniatallah]

ikr! I was like wait... they change ferris wheel riders??? SAY IT ISN'T SO!!

[frek]

so adorbs, bb. You write the best schmoop. <3

[eleniatallah]

thank you bb! I never tire of the schmoop X3 plus these fics are boosting my writing juices like whao!

[simon_alexander]

That was cute X3 I quite enjoyed this. One thing, though, is you seem to have some tense issues in this fic. Randomly, towards the end, the tense will change from past to present and back again. It did it a couple of times. You might want to edit that.

Other wise, awesome! Paul approves <3

[eleniatallah]

oooh yeah you're right, I do seem to have tense issues every so often, I'll need to go back in and fix that. It's a bad habit of mine, thanks for catching it!

Thanks a bunch, I'm glad you liked it! I'm hoping I'm doing the characters justice, since I've never read the manga and I stopped watching the anime after the Indigo League .////.

[eleniatallah]

eee thanks! ♥

you totally should, I would love to read it! And this fandom needs moar fic tbh!!

[eleniatallah]

hee! :3 glad you like! <3