the zig-zag map of a child's thoughts

Jun 30, 2005 21:45

new familar faces, new.
"winter clothes hung out to dry"
heavier, mentally. heavier, physically.
open.
opening.
close.
closer.
double-knotting those loose ends,
brick faced,
fingertips in wax.

the weight around my neck hangs lighter.

suggestions, comments, criticism.
response. challenge. confession.

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ladyoracle July 1 2005, 13:16:12 UTC
How is Cramer's grandfather doing?

I hope you are well.

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ex_kittybutl858 July 18 2005, 17:30:27 UTC
That is lovely.
I saw you had added me so added you back. I do like how you write, very much.

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elenoise July 19 2005, 01:39:19 UTC
i just realised, you are in austin...

where do you live? i am in hyde park..

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ex_kittybutl858 July 19 2005, 14:07:04 UTC
SA, not Austin. I WISH Austin.

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