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worsewithwords July 29 2012, 08:09:44 UTC
Why is this the greatest thing I've read in ages?
Nothing about this left me less than thoroughly impressed. Your Dom voice was too real. And what I especially loved was the "unintentional" humor. I laughed at "I've made a huge mistake." And Dom's "That doesn't hurt my feelings at all, so the jokes on you," just about made this my favorite thing ever.
Was that a covert 30 Rock reference at the end too with Dom's little "intercoursing" gesture?
In short, I love you. Plus, this was Dom-pov Arthur/Eames and it was spectacular.
thank you.

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eleveninches July 30 2012, 10:48:34 UTC
Wow, thank you! Haha, the intercoursing reference was actually for Community (Pierce always touches his pointer fingers together when two gay men are around, but I thought that was crude for Cobb, who is a total Dad), but it fits there too!

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theeverdream July 29 2012, 10:39:11 UTC
Wow. This is so confusing to me, how it's all funny and angsty, but not in the way that other humor/angst stories are both - I don't know how you did it but it's like... this blend of weird life has both up and downs kind of thing plus a bit of humor kinda meta thing, and I am so tired and not making sense but this is.... okay, the entire freaking fandom is amazing and this is a standout.

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eleveninches July 30 2012, 10:48:50 UTC
Thank you so much!

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_profiterole_ July 29 2012, 14:42:46 UTC
Oh my God, Dom is such a dick! You always get that right in your fics, but here he doesn't even manage to learn his lesson. *headdesk*

Lots of love for Eames/Arthur and for Ariadne! <3 Also, Eames quoting Tyrion = WIN! :D

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eleveninches July 30 2012, 10:49:29 UTC
Thank you! I like to think he eventually learns his lesson after much reflection. And then maybe Ariadne gives him his PASIV back.

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jacobella41 July 30 2012, 01:42:14 UTC
such a fun, humorous journey. this dom is something i rarely encountered and i rather enjoyed it. also ariadne and eames. great read!

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eleveninches July 30 2012, 10:49:38 UTC
Thank you!

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jasper32 July 31 2012, 16:50:47 UTC
Why is it that I understand how dickish Dom is the whole way through, and I still end up feeling for him? D:

Cobb you're confusing me.

Anyway: highly enjoyable! Every time an "inspirational" quote appeared I cracked up.

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eleveninches July 31 2012, 19:48:51 UTC
Thank you! Poor, poor evil Cobb.

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