What Everyone Else Thought (Part 2)

[elffriend26]

Title: What Everyone Else Thought (Part 2)
Author: Elffriend26
Spoilers: Vague ones for the series and many for my other fics in this universe.
Rating/Warnings: PG
Word Count: 11,113
Disclaimer: Nope. Not Mine.

Summary: Sheldon and Penny are in a relationship and a lot of the people they know and love have their own thoughts and observations on

Comments

[galfridian]

This all looks good except you would want your story behind a lj-cut.

TO DO A LJ-CUT:

<*lj-cut text="..."*>STORYHERE

Except when you use it, remove the *!

You also want spaces between all of your paragraphs, like so:

erhaps she would be able to take one of them out before Mr or Mrs. Smith took her down. She had seen them in combat though. They stuck together to strengthen their odds of surviving. As the better shot, she often covered him while he worked out tactics and gave orders. He’d started getting better and begun returning the favour.

She might not be able to get a hit at all. But never let it be said that Leslie Delores Winkle backed down from a challenge.

She kicked open the shed door with a yell and ran out to meet them firing without pause.

[elffriend26]

Added spaces between paragraphs and the Cut. Is this okay?

[galfridian]

The cut isn't working. Where did you put it?

It should go like this:

This story runs parallel to these series. You might want to read those to get more out of the story. Hope you guys like.

<*lj-cut*>Mary Cooper

[elffriend26]

Tried again.