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Fic: Your Halo Slipping Down to Choke You Now

Feb 14, 2012 08:59

Title:Your Halo Slipping Down to Choke You Now
Author: elfladyarwen
Pairings/Characters: Dean/Castiel, Leviathan
Spoilers: up to 7x02
Word Count: ~1,640
Warnings: Angst, canon character death (sorta)
Rating: PG-13
Author’s Note: Written for the #10 - Breath square on my spn_30snapshots table. I've decided to play sad!Cas pong with the_diggler, who wrote this beautiful little gem after ( Read more... )

spn_30snapshot, dean/castiel, angst, spn fic

Comments 13

cedelede February 14 2012, 14:45:51 UTC

Oh, Cas.

I'm finding it difficult to breathe as well. And I LOVE that you worked that throughout the story.

This was gorgeously written. Truly poetic and heart-breaking. It's too early in the morning to be this sad.

elfladyarwen February 14 2012, 15:32:32 UTC

Happy Valentine's Day! >:D Moohaha

(lol, I'm so sorry)

Thanks so much for the nice comment though.

alkthoniel February 14 2012, 18:55:25 UTC

That was beautiful, and so heartbreaking! You can really feel Cas' desperation and despair, culminating in that final wonderful Dean inspired act of self destruction. I like the breathe theme running through too. Nice job :D

(And I immediately thought of Cas when I first heard that song too. I requested a vid a whie back: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-DyNNeiuJX0 props to limabetaed, I just about cried first watching it XD )

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elfladyarwen February 15 2012, 15:00:30 UTC

YUSS. Fanvids to songs that inspire me to write are just so full of win.

I'm glad you could feel the despair. Of course most of what Cas does is a Dean inspired act of self destruction if you think about it. xD

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elfladyarwen February 15 2012, 15:01:46 UTC

But I love you. :3 Your tears fuel my sadistic need to bring the fandom to it's knees.

dazedrose February 15 2012, 02:00:35 UTC

I can't breath. You have done an amazing job with this fic. So very powerful. I'm not use to reading 1st POV in SPN but it works so well here. Make it that much more real.

elfladyarwen February 15 2012, 15:02:51 UTC

Oh good! I'm glad the 1st person POV worked out. I never use it, but Diggler did such a fine job with it in her fic, I just had to try it on for size myself. Thanks for your lovely compliments! :D

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elfladyarwen February 15 2012, 15:03:51 UTC

Nonsense. I know that you know you can't live without me.