Rainy days

[elforevereunhae]

Title: Rainy days
Pairing: Hyukjae/Donghae
Rating: R
Genre: Fluff, Romance, slight!Humor, mild!Smut
Summary: Donghae is thinking about his dead father and Hyukjae is the one who makes him forget.
A/N: This is my very first time writing a fanfiction. It was supposed to be a fluff but somehow it turned out to be a mild fail!smut.

Comments

[eunhae_holic86]

before i read i have to say youre jurnal gifs it amaizing and i love sweet words that you wrot pov the gifs how you make it ^^

[elforevereunhae]

Yay! You are my first comment ever! ^^
Thanks a lot! You're sweet. <3

[eunhae_holic86]

that was HOT and so romantic I lay here with you, both of us dressed only in underwear. "My body between your open legs, back resting against your bare chest and my head on your shoulder, long hair tickling your neck. Your muscular arms are wraped around my waist, hands meeting at my belly and my hands are laid on them, fingers drawing invisible patterns on your silky smooth skin."this my fav part

[elforevereunhae]

Oh, really? I had some problems with this part because I didn't know how to describe the position. Ahh, I'm relieved.
Thanks, glad you like it! ^^

[lovehyuk_suju]

it's so sweet and romantic!!^^
very very nice~!

[elforevereunhae]

Oh, I love you for liking it! ^^
Thank you for reading! <3

[dizzchan]

*blushing*

Kyaaaa!!! Eunhaeee smut!! U know.. It's really rare to find hae!bottom..... And I luv thiiiiiisss soo muucchhh!!!

This's soooooooo sweet and make me laugh too... Haeeee.. Why u look soo cuteeee in hereeee!!!!! *wanna bite him* >.<

Thanks dear for making this....!!!
Welcome to lj-world.. And can I add you??? *give you puppy eyes*
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[elforevereunhae]

Right, and Hyuk deserves to be on top!
Cute Hae is the best Hae! ^^
Thank YOU for reading!!! <3
And yes, please! Add me! I'll add you back. ^^
<3

[fishink]

I've read a bunch of fics in which the author says it's a fail!fic, I have to agree with some and totally disagree with others.

Calling this fic a fail is such a silly thing to do. I like your writing and the way the story goes. Don't say it's fail because it really is awesome.

It was cute, sweet, touchy and hot (:. No anyone can unite all those things in one fic, I'm telling ya, I've read a BUNCH of fics. (Which doesn't really make me an expert but it's just my humble opinion lol).

Then I got some perverted mood or whatever so I wrote the blowjob scene and then I realised I can't write smut so I wrote it just figuratively.

LOL, that happened to me in one of my fics, I got to a point when I realised what I was writing and then I just blocked. Had to ended up with other thing.

Ok, cutting this long comment, I like your side bar :D.

*waves*

[elforevereunhae]

OMG! You can't even imaginate how happy you made me! I really thought it's a fail but you convinced me it's not. Thanks so so so much! <3
Yes, block! That's the right word! lol
Thanks for liking it! ^^
*waves back*
<3

[dreamyfishy]

OMGGGGG *squeals* this is so cute sweet hot fluffy and everything!!!!
Finally top!hyuk fic, top!hyuk is so rare these days :'(
Anw I love this fic, the way you describe the scenes, like I can totally picture them in my head :D
And I especially love the kiss part /AKLGDDHGSHLHF
Thanks for sharing ^^

P.s. I added you n__n

[elforevereunhae]

Yes! top!Hyuk FTW!!! <3
Nyuuu, thanks for liking it! *huggles you*
*adds you back* ^^