The sky above us

Nov 02, 2010 20:39

Title: The sky above us
Pairing: Donghae/Hyukjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Fluff, Romance
Summary: Just one beautiful night spent at the beach and one beautiful moment between two lovers.
A/N: My second fic - another attempt for romantic Eunhae. Kinda inspired by this beautiful Coldplay song.

You stand here in the water with me sticked to you. A couple of droplets are running down your bare shoulders, flowing down to connect with the surface of the sea and your wet skin seems to glow under the moonlight. You are so beautiful that I just can't believe you're all mine. )

fanfiction: the sky above us, pairing: haehyuk, lenght: oneshot, genre: fluff, rating: pg-13, genre: romance

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elforevereunhae November 3 2010, 08:53:37 UTC
Oh, don't cry dear! *pass you tissues*
Thank you so so so much!!! <333
ily2~♥

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alvi_haehyukie November 2 2010, 23:53:05 UTC
*died*
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OMG~~~~ u said this is ur second fic???? but dear u're really great writer... i love the way u describe them n the metaphore it's melts my heart...
this so sweett,, so romantic,, n so much fluffinesss that make me dies again... ><

"You know Donghae, the stars could fade and die, but our love will always live on. It's written in the sky." <------ i really love this part,, no one can beat EunHae'S LOVE!!!!!! <3<3<3

see,, u totally make my day.. i can't stop smiling... :)
how come u said that u're not satisfied with this??? listen dear,, u really make a great job with this.. *2 thumbs up 4 u n big hug if u don't mind* ^^

jeongmal kamsahamnida 4 make this!!
hope u can make another fics like this..
love u!!
fighting!!! \(^o^)/

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elforevereunhae November 3 2010, 08:58:06 UTC
I'm so glad I made your day! ^^
Thanks very much for liking it!!! <3
Thanks for lovely comment! It made me happy!
I'll definitely write more!
ily2 <333

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alvi_haehyukie November 2 2010, 23:54:09 UTC
ahhh~~~ almost forget..
can u add me as ur friend?? ^^

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elforevereunhae November 3 2010, 08:55:42 UTC
Yes, sure! ^^

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purple_garden November 3 2010, 02:00:05 UTC
That fish is pretty crazy sometimes but no one is sweeter than him <3
This is so romantic *_* I swear i'd scream like hell if i could see their sweet moments at the beach. Then i'd take my camera out and record xDDD Or i should borrow a pro camera to do that :Q I'll keep watching it again & again xDD I guess that fish would eat his beloved monkey up right at that beach :Q____________ But dont let your precious monkey catch a cold or i'll kick your ass!

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elforevereunhae November 3 2010, 08:50:37 UTC
Yes! Record! I'll join you! ^^
Ahh, fishies just love monkeys and vice versa. <3
Thanks for comment, dear!
<333

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giligowla November 3 2010, 02:16:00 UTC
I like your writing sweetie ^^
you're about to kiss me I shiver and my nose wrinkles from itching and this is my fav scene.
thank you for posting it!

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elforevereunhae November 3 2010, 08:36:51 UTC
Thanks so much! ^^
Thanks fot commenting! <3

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