Mi Cama Huele A Ti - Dan/Nando, drabble.

[elisa88]

So I have no clue what this is all about, but I was sitting on my computer and this song started playing and The Writing Muse attacked my brain with images of Dan mopping around his house, thinking of Fer. You can actually picture this being about anyone, but if you'd like to know, I was thinking of Danny and Nando whilst I wrote it. The title

Comments

[tetila]

Ouch my poor heart! But anyway I thought it was good and I liked it!
It's really sad how Dan only has these small reminders of their time together. Poor boy :(

But I really hope there is more where this comes from :)

[elisa88]

It is sad that that's all he has of their relationship. I hated myself for hurting Dan, but in my mind it was him.

Thank you for your comment, it is really flattering that you thought it was good!

[jumping_down]

So simple and yet so haunting. Great work.

[elisa88]

Thank you so much for your comment! ♥

[titania_torres]

simple and painful but in a beautiful way. You can feel his pain and the almost desperation to forget clashing with the need not to.
very nicely written

[elisa88]

yes! definitely what I was going for. Thank you!! :)