some poems I wrote a long time ago....

Nov 16, 2004 10:46

I found these the other day and I thought I would share them. They still hold a lot of meaning for me ( Read more... )

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just, damn... ovate14 November 17 2004, 01:07:05 UTC
Just when i think I know you, you do something else that amazes me.
When did you write those? doesn't sound like a happy time in your life. And it's uncanny how much the first one mirrors some of my own feelings, I'd love to hear some more if you'd care to share.

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Re: just, damn... elisad November 17 2004, 01:34:44 UTC
well, funny you should like the first one. I wrote it back when I was in high school and moved away from you, my mom, all the school friends I had, my source of comfort and support... and really had mixed feelings about it all. The second one I wrote after I had moved and mom was giving me all sorts of guilt trips over not wanting to live with her. We still cannot talk about the past. She has always been a big source of guilt and pain. Even now, she still has not managed to get insurance on the car I bought her almost a month ago, as well as plate it, even though she has a check made out to the dmv to do just that. Sigh. I guess she is like having another kid... have to be with her and make her do everything.

I really haven't written any poetry for quite a while. I guess I should make some time for myself and my thoughts. I always did like writing. We shall see what I can come up with.

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Re: just, damn... joleta November 17 2004, 04:28:10 UTC
yes, yes...my dear whispering dawn re-emerges... hehe (please don't hit me) *hugs*

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Re: just, damn... ovate14 November 18 2004, 01:11:11 UTC
I love the way you put that, it fits her so well.

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