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Jan 06, 2011 12:34

Title: Big Papa’s Little Havana 1/?
Author: elise50
Pairing: Mark/Callie
Rating: PG-13
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nyladreams January 6 2011, 21:25:24 UTC

I love the title, first of all.
Secondly, this is so fun and sexy! You write so wonderfully. I love how you've incorporated some of the other "cast" - lol - and I can't wait to read more :)

elise50 January 8 2011, 05:13:57 UTC

lol thanks...i actually have no idea where it came from.

expect more 'cast' members to be sprinked throughout ;)

thanks so much for taking a chance on my weird little adventure.

callieluvr January 6 2011, 22:03:35 UTC

You, my friend, are so brave. I've been meaning to write something completely au but I'm so very afraid lol this is awesome. Film noir totally fits these two. Update now please:)

elise50 January 8 2011, 05:16:54 UTC

Oh you should try one! I'm sure it'd be amazing. tbh i'm terrified of this too, but i already threw it out there so i can't take it back lol.

I think film noir is perfect for them. And everyone else fits roles nicely too.

Thanks for reading :D

aclairec January 7 2011, 01:20:31 UTC

Totally love this! I really like AU stories with these two and this one is so unique but I can still totally picture them. Was NOT expecting that last line! Can't wait to read more! :-) Awesome start chica!

elise50 January 8 2011, 05:19:30 UTC

I love AU stories too, I've never see one this far out there...but I do love the 'what if' ones, they're just so much fun.

thank you for reading and taking the time to reveiw, it means alot :)

prsweetie915 January 7 2011, 01:38:46 UTC

I love this!!!! I can totally see Mark and Callie in the 1940s....Great job, I'm excited for this story

elise50 January 8 2011, 05:21:19 UTC

It's a pretty perfect era for them.

I'm glad some people are enjoying this. It makes me excited to write it :D

poisoned_candyy January 7 2011, 10:30:46 UTC

Mark in a fedora. Callie singing dressed like a pinup. Papi Torres. Alex and Owen the security. Meredith the assistant. Derek the boss. I LIKE THIS ALREADYYYYYY.

But woah, I was not expecting that last line whatsoever! Exciting!

elise50 January 8 2011, 05:28:00 UTC

yay you caught Derek, I wondered if that part was even noticeable. He won't make a physical appearance, but you'll get a little more info on him. Other people will be popping up too.

ah but it's noir styled, Calliope can't be all sunshine and roses lol. if she was, she'd be incredibly annoying (and boring); we can't have that