Comments | elisha2kings: revamped drabble

elisha2kings

revamped drabble

Mar 17, 2010 10:13

I wrote this for a drabble session over at naye 's Post-574 Chaos Thread Party.

Prompt: The things you leave behind you'll always carry.

( Of bounty posters and brotherly love... )

ace, whitebeard

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elisha2kings March 18 2010, 05:38:17 UTC

*blushes furiously* Thanks!

I was just trying to figure out the One Piece timeline sequence between Ace showing off Luffy's wanted poster and Teach betraying the WB pirates, so... yeah.

Glad you like it! :)

eiliem March 18 2010, 04:44:32 UTC

This is even worse

TT___________________________TT

Why did I reread it? Whyyyyyyyyyyyyy?!

*clings*

I... love it. TT___________TT

(But you're still evil! ;_;)

elisha2kings March 18 2010, 05:39:40 UTC

Muahahaha! I learned from the master! *bows to a shrine of Oda*

Thanks again! :) I'll try to write some fluff to make up for it.

<- May tiny brothers inspire happy fluffy thoughts eiliem March 18 2010, 05:44:32 UTC

*CLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING*

Fluff! Yes! Fluff is good. *needs more fluff* D8

The master teaches well. Much much too well. XP

ah_18 March 25 2010, 21:45:11 UTC

Whoaaa, I loved it!!!!!!!

But that Thatch part gave me the chills... x__x Poor Thatch, damn it!!!!

elisha2kings March 25 2010, 22:16:27 UTC

Thanks!

The Thatch part was meant to be slightly disturbing knowing what happens right afterward. :( I was in a rather dark mood when I wrote this.

ah_18 March 26 2010, 10:08:54 UTC

It's good, it's not that I got the chills 'cause it was bad, it was the perfect part there to be all disturbing... it went from happiness to the dark side, well written! :)

elisha2kings March 26 2010, 15:03:47 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :D