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Fic: Blowjobs Can't Save The Universe (But You Might As Well Try) (Doctor Who, NC-17)

Jun 18, 2007 05:57

Title: Blowjobs Can't Save The Universe (But You Might As Well Try)
Author: randomeliza
Fandom: Doctor Who/Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ten, Jack/Nine/Rose, Jack/Nine
Rating: lots of NC-17 in one convenient pornlet size!
Word Count: <1000
Summary: ( Jack isn't under the illusion that his blowjobs can save the universe. )

doctor who, fic: blowjobs can't save the universe, torchwood

Comments 10

fahye June 18 2007, 10:38:28 UTC

...you did manage to fit a lot into less than a thousand words! Very hot porn, a nicely coherent idea to pull it together (I do like the concept of arousal as a catalyst for breakthrough: babbling a mix of science and sex was what really pulled me in) and a handful of good character points about what Jack misses and what he's looking forward to.

I like it! And it's very...pocket-sized :D The kind of thing you can reread when you're just looking for a quick fix.

soundship June 18 2007, 21:09:06 UTC

YES! Very nice.

smithy161 June 18 2007, 22:42:22 UTC

I'm very drunk bt this os good. Will let you know later if it's good when I'm sober. I think it will be. H7rray!"

elyssadc June 19 2007, 02:50:34 UTC

I do believe I have discovered the greatest lines ever written in the english language:

Jack isn't under the illusion that his blowjobs can save the universe. But he's never come across a situation in which they hurt it, even a little.

You've officially won the fandom. Congratulations.

pandapony June 19 2007, 02:51:05 UTC

that was hot. thanks!