THE REAL LIVEJOURNAL IDOL SEASON 10, WEEK 17: "NEVERMIND"

[ellakite]

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[messygorgeous]

OH MY GAWD!

Completely wasn't expecting that, lol.

Damned government officials. Too bad that one actually did her job RIGHT for once but still got snuffed.

[ellakite]

I do like surprising my readers -- if they know what's coming, why would they want to read the story?

Thanks for the feedback!

[favoritebean]

Literally died in a fire. Eeeeee! I did not see that coming.

[ellakite]

Marjory Banks didn't see me coming, either. :D

Thanks for the feedback!

[eternal_ot]

Ha! I would have never predicted this :D Great take on the prompt. Loved the twisted end which makes the reader say "Ah!Well..Nevermind" ;) Good work!

[ellakite]

There are multiple "nevermind" moments in this piece; that's why it works (and fits the prompt so well).

Thanks for the feedback!

[kschlotwrites]

WTF? And I mean that in the best way possible! This was great. I love the "Oh well" attitude at the end.

[ellakite]

You know, when I wrote this piece I hadn't consciously realized that the last line fit the "Nevermind" prompt to a T. I seem to have a habit of building better than I know... and thanks so very much for the feedback.

[roina_arwen]

Lol! Nicely done!