'his mind focusing on something of the likes of beating a grandma in the face with a hatchet.'
OMG LOL. XD I'm sorry, but that was just... funny. Har. It just takes me to pick out stuff like that in a smutfic. ;D
Nonono! I loved it. I actually like the fact that it was a bit more... er, romantic/sentimental than just plain smutty and horny. It made it a better story as a whole, and not something trashy, y'know? I really love your prose, too. It's very easy to read and can be easily absorbed/processed in my sometimes slow brain. XD I think you depicted Axel and Kairi rather well -- Kairi being all innocent but having her inner-desires, and Axel being a manwhore but a sweet friend on the side. ♥
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OMG LOL. XD I'm sorry, but that was just... funny. Har. It just takes me to pick out stuff like that in a smutfic. ;D
Nonono! I loved it. I actually like the fact that it was a bit more... er, romantic/sentimental than just plain smutty and horny. It made it a better story as a whole, and not something trashy, y'know? I really love your prose, too. It's very easy to read and can be easily absorbed/processed in my sometimes slow brain. XD I think you depicted Axel and Kairi rather well -- Kairi being all innocent but having her inner-desires, and Axel being a manwhore but a sweet friend on the side. ♥
Thank you soo much!!! :D ♥♥ It was a good read. ♥
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