Comments | ellie101: More Random Drivel, because I'm a terrible procrastinator. :P

ellie101

More Random Drivel, because I'm a terrible procrastinator. :P

May 07, 2007 02:39

The Little Girl of Forgotten ( Read more... )

writing, random

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grace_draven May 7 2007, 10:25:00 UTC

Wow. Poignant and creepy, with great imagery.

ellie101 May 7 2007, 15:06:30 UTC

Thank you! :P I wrote this reeeeally late at night when I should have been doing my homework. *cough* I'm so glad that you liked it!

shadowycat May 7 2007, 14:14:34 UTC

Beautifully written. You've created a strikingly haunting atmosphere. I want to know more. :)

ellie101 May 7 2007, 15:09:43 UTC

Aw, thanks! :)

I have NO idea what happens next, I was basically just writing to write. However, I'll definitely let you know if a plot bunny attacks! Lol.

shadowycat May 7 2007, 18:03:30 UTC

LOL...so I guess that means you don't know her name either. Poor child... ;P

Lol. ellie101 May 8 2007, 05:29:02 UTC

Well, I didn't want her to have a name, because I liked the idea that she's been truly "Forgotten" :P

I s'pose if I was feeling clever I could've looked up the French word for "Forget" or something..... "Oublier." Lol. Or latin: "Oblivio." Though I really don't care for either. lol!

Any ways her mom didn't NAME her! And I get the sneaking suspicion that the little girl isn't really human anyways....

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